I’m going to talk about technology, specially the internet; I’m going to compare the bad and good things about the internet and give my opinion about it.
The good things of the internet are those:
The information: you can find all information of the world, you can know what is happening in the other part of the world, and read it with the language that you want. Also if you forget buy the newspaper, or you want save some money, you’ve got the all information without any problem.
There are a lot of websites that gives you information about a concrete theme, for example, the school web.

It’s a good way for communicate with people or share your ideas or your opinion too.
There is the Facebook, a personal page where you can talk with friend and people the lives very far of you.

In the internet you can find all the music that you want; new or old songs, and the lyrics too.
There are websites like youtube that you can find the videoclips
However internet is not perfect because there are hackers wich can sends you virus.
Overall, this is good essay, Claudia. I think you maybe need to finish it! :) You can listen to my comments here: http://www.screencast.com/t/jtZPL4ay7SK0
Please use these comments to correct the essay. Thanks


CORRECTION AFTER LISTENING:
OPINION ESSAY (11th February 2011)

I’m going to talk about technology, specially the internet; I’m going to compare the bad and good things about the internet and give my opinion about it.

The good things of the internet are those: the information. You can find all information of the world, you can know what is happening in the other part of the world, and read it with the language that you want. Also if you forget buy the newspaper, or you want save some money, you’ve got the all information without any problem.
There are a lot of websites that show you information about a concrete theme, for example, the school web.

It’s a good way for communicate with people or share your ideas or your opinion too.
There is the Facebook, a personal page where you can talk with friend and people who lives very far of you.

In the internet you can find all the music that you want; new or old songs, and the lyrics too.
There are websites like youtube that you can find the videoclips


However internet is not perfect because there are hackers wich can sends virus.
But it’s not that the only bad thing, there are other cain af things that become the Internet being dangerous; we always have to be careful using it, and there is no problem if you know how it use it correctly.
There is a problem when we use uncorrectly the Internet because we can get a false information, find people who are obsess and adict at injury games or that they are head sick people who pretend they are 15 years and probably they are 50! The last thing that i am desagree with is the advertising, it is everywhere in all the sites and too much of it can be disturbing.
Finally, my opinion about the Internet theme, is that we need the thecnology, specially the Internet generation, wich are teenagers that use it for do harly everithing, i think that Internet is very useful in our lives and helps to enjoy it better.
For the other hand, and obviously, Internet is dangerous and we have to know how to use it correctly for being more saver.

Clàudia Antonell










Term 1 test resultsGrammar: 31 / 52 (60%)Reading: 13 / 18 (72%)Writing: 3 / 5Well done Blanca - this is a very good result.Dear Claudia

Welcome to the Senior 5 course!

My name is Paul and I’m going to be your teacher. I’ve worked at this school for 5 years and I live in Sant Cugat with my wife and two children. I’m 37 years old and my hobbies include running, playing football and going camping with my family.

I love living in Spain and really enjoy travelling to places in Cataluña and France.

I hope you enjoy the course and learn a lot.

Please reply and tell me a few things about yourself.

Thanks

Paul



Hi Paul!

How are you?
Now i'm gonna write something about my life;
First, my name is Claudia and i'm fourteen, but next week it's going to be my birtday; it's my first year in this english school.What a concidence, i live in Sant Cugat too; it's a beautiful town.But i go to school in Barcelona and i think that i don't improve there a lot so i go to British Council because i want to learn more.
Last holidays i went with my family to London, i liked a lot but when i was speaking with an english people i thank that i need more vocabulary.
It was a good experiance because i had the oportunity to talk in english.


Here are my cmments about your homework... http://www.screencast.com/t/M4oy47eG