Introduction:
I’m going to write about the good and bad things that the internet has, also I’m going to tell my opinion and why I have it.

Good things about the internet
· the games: the games are very cool to play in the internet because you can play with somebody else and also you can download them.
You can play to all type of games in the internet like for example the most popular games are violent games like “call of duty”

· Social networks: the social networks are cool for most of the young and older people but the young people use them more.
There exist a lot of types of social networks like Twitter or Facebook.

· Music: you can listen to music on the internet, you can also download it, but it’s not recommended because it’s illegal.
You can also create it, and buy it with some especial programs like Itunes.

· Videos: you can see all type of videos in the internet from funny videos to porn videos; you can also see movies or download them.
Bad things about the internet

· Stealing money: most people steal money on the internet from particular people or from important internet enterprises.

· Virus: some hackers, put virus on your computer to steal some important information or just they want to crash your computer,
There are some different type of virus like “xploits” that steal the passwords of all the programs and other type of websites that you visit and more.
Conclusion

My conclusion is that internet has good things and bad things so you can be perjudicated, and also you can be beneficiated but it’s a usefull tool or platform.

This is a very good essay Javier. Well done! Listen to my comments here: http://www.screencast.com/t/nMkskBmQY and then make changes to your essay to correct it. Thanks :)

I’m going to write about the good and bad things that the internet has, also I’m going to tell my opinion and why I have it.

the games: the games are very cool to play in the internet because you can play with somebody else and also you can download them.
You can play to all type of games in the internet like for example the most popular games are violent games like “call of duty”
Social networks: the social networks are cool for most of the young and older people but the young people use them more.
There exist a lot of types of social networks like Twitter or Facebook.
Music: you can listen to music on the internet, you can also download it, but it’s not recommended because it’s illegal.
You can also create it, and buy it with some especial programs like Itunes.
Videos: you can see all type of videos in the internet from funny videos to porn videos; you can also see movies or download them.

Stealing money: most people steal money on the internet from particular people or from important internet enterprises.
Virus: some hackers, put virus on your computer to steal some important information or just they want to crash your computer,
There are some different type of virus like “xploits” that steal the passwords of all the programs and other type of websites that you visit and more.

My conclusion is that internet has good things and bad things so you can be perjudicated, and also you can be beneficiated but it’s a usefull tool or platform
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Term 1 Test ResultsGrammar: 17 / 50 (34%)Reading: 9 / 18 (50%)Writing: 2.5 / 5These results are disappointing Javier. I think you will need to try and improve a lot during the next termDear Javier

Welcome to the Senior 5 course!

My name is Paul and I’m going to be your teacher. I’ve worked at this school for 5 years and I live in Sant Cugat with my wife and two children. I’m 37 years old and my hobbies include running, playing football and going camping with my family.

I love living in Spain and really enjoy travelling to places in Cataluña and France.

I hope you enjoy the course and learn a lot.

Please reply and tell me a few things about yourself.

Thanks

Paul

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Dear paul

My name is Javier, i like watching tv
I live in barcelona and I dont have no suns or daughters, I have two sisters and one brother.
I am 14 years old and I go to Escola Pia Sarria school, it's quite near here.
About food I like more or less everything,
I wan't to lear more grammar than the grammar I know now and I would like to enjoy this course.
My favourite thing to do is repair computers and also playing iphone games.

thanks Javier.



FOTOEDIT


Utilities:

It is used to edit all type of photos made from your camera or saved in you’re device.
I’ts a cool application that you can use to send e-mail photos to your friends and family.

Why

You can put your pictures on picture frame. You can paint your pictures and put some special effects like deform the picture and others.